I added some color on the left shape and some darks on the lower right. I felt the lower right shape had so much contrast it led your eye out of the painting.
Robin Purcell AWS,NWS,MCWA Signatures. California Art Club Artist. Signature Artist Laguna Plein Air Painters Association. American Impressionists Society Signature Member California watercolor landscape painter. Plein Air and Studio Works. all images copyright the artist
Summer Ridge 12 x 16 watercolor on hot press. Exhibit will run November 24 to December 31in the SDWS gallery in Liberty Station ,San Diego.
Here’s the earlier stage:
I simplified the shapes on the slope because I thought they were too similar in size and shape.